I Gave an Xperia Z3 for myself as a Christmas Present.

Dec 27, 2014 23:46
Today, I bought an Xperia Z3 which is a smartphone made by Sony in an electronics store.

I could purchase it at 0 yen because I used MNP(Mobile Number Portability system) and then discount campaign of MNP was applied.

However, since the monthly fee is 1,000 yen during 2 years, so practically I bought it 24,000 yen.

It was a little bit late, but as a christmas present, I gave the Xperia Z3 for myself.

Hehehe.
今日は、電気屋でSony製のスマートフォン、XperiaZ3を買いました。

番号ポータビリティ（MNP）で購入したので、キャンペーンが適用され、本体代金0円で購入できました。

月額料金が2年間の間1000円なので、実質24000円で買ったことになります。

少し遅くなってしまいましたが、私自身へのクリスマスプレゼントです。

へへへ。
No. 1　Willow's correction
  • Today, I bought an Xperia Z3 which is a smartphone made by Sony in an electronics store.
  • Today, I bought an Xperia Z3, which is a smartphone made by Sony, at an electronics store.
  • I could purchase it at 0 yen because I used MNP(Mobile Number Portability system) and then discount campaign of MNP was applied.
  • I could purchase it for 0 yen because I used MNP (Mobile Number Portability system), and then MNP's promotional discount was applied.
  • However, since the monthly fee is 1,000 yen during 2 years, so practically I bought it 24,000 yen.
  • However, since there is a monthly fee of 1,000 yen for 2 years, I practically bought it for 24,000 yen.
    　You can use either 'since' or 'so' in a sentence, not both. (They have the same meaning.)
  • It was a little bit late, but as a christmas present, I gave the Xperia Z3 for myself.
  • It was a little bit late, but as a Christmas present, I gave the Xperia Z3 to myself.
  • Hehehe.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
kanotown
Thank you very much for your correction again!!(*^_^*)
No. 2　Timmy's correction
  • Today, I bought an Xperia Z3 which is a smartphone made by Sony in an electronics store.
  • Today, in an electronics store I bought a Xperia Z3 which is a smartphone made by Sony.
    　"An" is used before words starting with a vowel sound (example: an apple; an iPad etc.)
  • However, since the monthly fee is 1,000 yen during 2 years, so practically I bought it 24,000 yen.
  • However, since the monthly fee is 1,000 yen during 2 years, so practically I bought it for 24,000 yen.
  • It was a little bit late, but as a christmas present, I gave the Xperia Z3 for myself.
  • It was a little bit late, but as a Christmas present, I gifted myself the Xperia Z3.
The design of this handset is just superb. By the way, what color have you got?
kanotown
  • Today, in an electronics store I bought a Xperia Z3 which is a smartphone made by Sony.

    "An" is used before words starting with a vowel sound (example: an apple; an iPad etc.)

Thank you so much for your correction!!(≧∇≦)

I god a silver green one because I thought it's unique and cool!

>> "An" is used before words starting with a vowel sound
I thought that the word Xperia is pronounced "experia", as the word X-ray is pronounced "exray" (which startinf with a vowel sound). So I used "an" before "Xperia", but is the pronunciation of Xperia wrong..?
Timmy
>I god a silver green one because I thought it's unique and cool!

I personally like silver green the best, but the copper gold one is looking good too.

>So I used "an" before "Xperia", but is the pronunciation of Xperia wrong..?

You are right, it seems I forgot how to pronounce Xperia in English. This was my mistake.
kanotown
Ah, I misspelled the verb "got". XO

>> I personally like silver green the best, but the copper gold one is looking good too.
Yes! I didn't know which one to choose silver green or copper gold!
Both of them attracted me. (^^)
No. 3　's correction
  • Today, I bought an Xperia Z3 which is a smartphone made by Sony in an electronics store.
  • Today, I bought an Xperia Z3 which is a smartphone made by Sony in an electronics store.
Yay! :D
I got a Z3 too!
But I got the compact one.
kanotown
Wow!

We are in the same boat! (*´▽｀*)
I think the compact one is also cool and stylish!
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